Could you correct my grammar , Please?

On Tuesday/2/2011 at Starbucks downtown , I interviewed Mark Batmen for about 20 minutes . Batmen is briefly tell us how junk food effects our body . In the interview, we talked about Junk Food. I learned that Batmen believes that Junk food can destroy humanity.

Batmen told me that Fast food is the worst food people have during day time . People eating fast food because we made a life -style needs a lot of work with less time for activities. People eat too much Fast food , and they don't cook healthy food . This habit can destroy a body because the human body needs fiber . In addition , he compares his life in Africa to his life in Canada , In Africa , people eat for longer time, and women are responsible to cook food that has enough nutritional that support her family . In Kenya, she did see any fast food restaurant while she was their , and people refuse to eat food is not home made . while people in Canada do not care about quality of food they are eating. People looking for food that they can eat it for two minutes .Furthermore, Fast-food can destroy relationship because families are not able to set and talk to each other that make families do not have time to talk and share. She believes that a lot of calories make brain work less effective . To illustrate , A person who eat too much fast food can destroy his /her life.Could you correct my grammar , Please?
On Tuesday/2/2011 at Starbucks downtown , I interviewed Mark Batmen for about 20 minutes . Batmen briefly told us how junk food affects our body . In the interview, we talked about Junk Food. I learned that Batmen believed that Junk food could destroy humanity.
Batmen told me that Fast food is the worst food people have during day time . People eating fast food because we made a life -style that needs a lot of work to be done with less time for activities. People eat too much Fast food , and they don't cook healthy food . This habit could destroy a body because the human body needs fiber . In addition , he compared his life in Africa to his life in Canada , In Africa , people spend more time on eating, and women are responsible to cook food that has enough nutrition that supports her family . In Kenya, he did not see any fast food restaurant while he was their , and found that people refuse to eat food which is not home made . while people in Canada do not care about quality of food they are eating. People go for food that they can eat up in two minutes .Furthermore, Fast-food can destroy relationship because families are not able to sit and talk to each other that make families not having time to talk and share. he believes that a lot of calories make brain work less effective . To conclude, A person who eat too much fast food could destroy his /her life.Could you correct my grammar , Please?
On Tuesday 2nd 2011 at Starbucks downtown, I interviewed Mark Batmen for about 20 minutes. Batmen briefly tells us how junk food effects our body in the interview. I learned that Batmen believes that junk food can destroy humanity.聽Batmen told me that fast food is the worst food that people eat during the day time. People eat fast food because we have a life -style that needs a lot of work with less time for activities. People eat too much fast food and they don't cook healthy food. This habit can destroy a body because the human body needs fibre in their diet. In addition, he compares his life in Africa to his life in Canada. In Africa, people eat for a longer time and women are responsible to cook food that has enough nutrition that support her family. In Kenya, she didn't see any fast food restaurants while she was there and people refuse to eat food that is not home made while people in Canada do not care about quality of food they are eating. People look for food that they can eat for two minutes. Furthermore, fast-food can destroy relationships because families are not able to sit and talk to each other, fast food makes families not have time to talk and share. She believes that a lot of calories make brain work less effective. To illustrate, a person who eats too much fast food can destroy his/her life.Could you correct my grammar , Please?
On Tuesday/2/2011 at Starbucks downtown, I interviewed Mark Batmen for about 20 minutes. Batmen is briefly telling us how junk food affects our body. In the interview, we talked about Junk Food. I learned that Batmen believes that Junk food can destroy humanity.

Batmen told me that fast food is the worst food people have during day time. People are eating fast food because they made a lifestyle that needs a lot of work with less time for activities. People eat too much Fast food and they don't cook healthy food. This habit can destroy a body because the human body needs fiber. In addition, he compares his life in Africa to his life in Canada. In Africa, people eat for longer time and women are responsible to cook food that has enough nutrition that will support her families needs. In Kenya, she did not see any fast food restaurant while she was there and people refuse to eat food that is not home-made. Whilst people in Canada do not care about the quality of the food they are eating. People looking for food that they can eat in two minutes to save time. Furthermore, fast food can destroy a relationship because families are not able to sit and talk to each other, that means families do not have time to talk and share. She believes that a lot of calories make brain work less effective. To conclude, a person who eats too much fast food can destroy his /her life.

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